Short horror story. Tell me what you think?

You're no Edgar Allan Poe! I like the idea of the guy being in Hell, but I wish there would've been more to it! It's just to short! You cant really make a movie out of it! It wouldve been better if the guy would have to fight his way through Hell to get back to Earth! Or if it wouldve shown the guy getting torchured as he entered Hell! You should rewrite it with a lot more details, and scenes and then me an my buddy can make a movie out of it, and it will end up on the Youtube! Do you even know what you're gonna call it?